User blog comment:BCtheBoss/It's Finally Here!/@comment-24958008-20160816040834/@comment-24184651-20160816054404

Well, it's a bit early to judge, but I can't help but feel like the character introductions were kind of rushed. Everybody is explained in one large paragraph. I like to show, not tell. Then again, my take on these characters and this storyline is different -- more grounded, I guess, and the way I write isn't the same way you do.