User blog comment:BCtheBoss/It's Finally Here!/@comment-24958008-20160816040834/@comment-24184651-20160816055843

See, it's really tough because my vision of this story is different from yours in a lot of ways. I'm actually working on a rough draft of my own take at the moment. I can share it with you if I find the time to complete it.

And I'm not saying your version is bad or anything. It's not. Just offering some constructive criticism, that's all. No hard feelings. :)