Board Thread:Non Skylanders Fan Wiki/@comment-35357669-20160426054129/@comment-24184651-20160427012600

I watched the video in full, so if you don't mind, here's my feedback:

Positives:


 * Okay, first of all, I quite enjoyed your voice. Don't take that in a weird way. You just sound pleasant. You know, accents and stuff...


 * The map itself is well made. I'd probably give it a shot if I still played Minecraft. But yeah, it looks professional, the challenges are varied, and I like the idea of a vague story told through signs and visual cues. Nice job!


 * You didn't make too many mistakes throughout the playthrough, and you edited through some tedious bits.

Criticisms:


 * It's definitely got the look and the feel of a first video. The video is laggy, not the greatest quality, and you desperately need a professional microphone.


 * The editing could be a bit more common. You fell off a lot towards the end, and in my opinion, you should've cut those parts out.


 * Your commentary maybe could've been a bit more interesting. Talk about the development stage, tell a story, crack a joke or two. This is my smallest criticism, because I know you'll improve drastically in the future, and I'm positive I'd be just the same in my first video.

Conclusion:


 * All in all, I'd say I enjoyed your video. The gameplay and your voice were enough to make up for the only decent quality presentation and audio, and I can tell you'll get much better as time goes on. I'm looking forward to the next one. Keep it up! :)