Talk:Blazerfly/@comment-25635709-20151104124858

Gonna be honest but the biography section is really incoherent, I had to read it a few times just to try and get an idea of what you were trying to say Gotta do some proof reading or get someone to edit it I'll edit it quickly right now: "Blazerfly was a part of a team of butterflies that helped save their kingdom, when she and the Butterfly Bombers raided Cap n' Cluck`s king sized chickens HQ to get the magic that Cluck stole to make his chicken (? I don't understand this part. "To make his chicken" make his chicken what?) she got some (magic) on her and she grew to human size. (Period is the end of a thought. "She grew to human size" that's one thought and the end of a sentence) (She) save(d) her kingdom(.) just like thrillepede blazerfly got challegend by flyyn and she beat him by 3 minutes eon saw the potential in her and made her and her a magical vehicle skylanders."