Board Thread:Non Skylanders Fan Wiki/@comment-35357669-20160426054129/@comment-24184651-20160514035306

I just finished the video. Here are my thoughts:

Positives:


 * The audio is a lot better. It's still not the cleanest, no, but it's refreshing to finally be able to properly understand you without all that obnoxious background noise.


 * The editing helped dramatically. I can't imagine having to sit through all of the failed jumps in full. Seriously, nice work.

Criticisms:
 * The map looks great, as usual. Very well built. You obviously put a lot of time into it, and it paid off.


 * You desperately need to do something about that lag. It takes a lot away from the enjoyment of the video, especially when your commentary turns bitter because of it.


 * It does feel a bit tedious at times. If I'm going to sit through thirty minutes of Minecraft, there needs to be something to hold my interest. I suggest potentially adding some background music. Just try to spice things up a bit.

Conclusion:
 * Minor nitpick, but I don't think you need to say your full name at the start of the video. It just comes off as corny to me. Something like, "Hey guys, it's Poseidon" is a lot simpler and is just as effective.


 * Compared to the last videos, it's definitely an improvement. Better and more frequent editing, clearer audio, a more solid presentation overall. There still are issues, some a lot bigger than others, but I'm sure you'll fix them soon. Keep growing!